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Surrender Everything – Chapter 1
Tina arrived in the house she shared with her three brothers. She was exhausted. She threw her bags down and walked over to the couch where she fell down on closing her eyes and sighing. Then, her oldest brother, Adal, walked in.
“Tina! You’re back.” He sounded exited and walked over to her, giving her a kiss on her cheek. Tina kept her eyes closed she was just too tired. Adal had light brown hair and green eyes. His skin was a shade lighter than hers was and he had a friendly smile.
“Hey…” She murmured back.
“How was the training?” Adal asked, sitting next to his sister on the couch, stroking his sister’s blond hair.
“Hell.” Tina told him. He chuckled and gave her a kiss on her forehead.
“Well, baby sis, you knew it wouldn’t be a joy ride.” He said. “I got to get my kids from school; I just wanted to check up on you. See if you were still alive.”
“Okay.” Tina answered.
Adal smiled before walking out. Tina thought back at her training. It had been hours and days of meditation, concentration exercises and physical training. She had to be able to run 10 km in 30 seconds. She had to be fast Dana said. She also had to be able to run for 6 hours without stopping. She had to have stamina. It had taken 3 weeks of intense training to reach all the goals Dana had said only to hear that it was only meant to prove to Dana that Tina really wanted to reach her goals, it had nothing to do with morphing. Tina could have hit Dana, but she didn’t.
However, the concentrating exercises were good to morph. Dana explained how she could change into a human. First, she had to fold her hands and hold them in front of her face. Then, she had to concentrate on her skin, try to feel every inch off it and imagine it change color in her head. From Royal Purple to white. She had to concentrate on how she would look as a human. Then, Tina felt her skin begin to burn. She tried to stay focused and ignore it. Somewhere, she heard Dana, say it was okay, that it was normal. She could feel her symbols light up and then feel her body absorb them.
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(45 votes, average: 3.29 out of 5)
Please,this is cruel to stop here.Thank you for the update.
that’s where you stopped?? ahh! haha man, that’s what i get for asking that stupid can impregnate themselves question! I was just kidding GOD! lol PPS!!! (like…now!)
Thank you for writing something so very different! Unfortunately “sci-fi” doesn’t get you a lot of views (remember Kelika’s Daughter’s of Kirk and Spock?) but those who do read are loyal and appreciate the imagination and talent involved. Kelika’s story was truly one of the very best on the site, but she never got the view counts for that story than those received for a mediocre NC-17. This story has already hooked me. The character’s physical traits and the planets are all so very well thought out. I am looking forward the the next chapter!! Thanks!!
Awesome!..they are going to meet each other. ..I’m praying that..Tina would take Bette away before the so called “meeting of the men.”
Such a meanie for stopping there
Oh no, you didn’t stop there!
this good, don’t stop we need to know what will happen next ;D
hey PPS you cant just stop there pleasee
Read both your updates on this story. love it. thank you. can’t wait to read more.
WOOHOO Finally Bette and Tina meet!