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You’ve started, so I’ll finish…Chapter 5
Alice became aware of Danas breathing and realised that she was crying. She pulled back and looked Dana in the eye.
Why are you crying honey?
I dont know really, well I do, but I dont want to be crying coz I really do feel happy that this happened, and it was wonderfulI just
Just tell me Dana and well sort it out Alice replied, beginning to really worry that somehow she had fucked up badly.
Al, I have been in love with you since the first time we met, and after what you just said it made me realise that you havent. Maybe you only want me now because you were worried about losing me to Tonya. Im still way less experienced than you are Al, and really the only reason I got together with Tonya was because I am so inexperienced and I confused her wanting me as me being in love with her. I mean, how lame is that? She took a deep breath and continued I guess what Im trying to say is, you didnt want me when I was inexperienced, but I still am, and in fact if it wasnt for the fact that Im inexperienced, I would never have got together with Tonya, and then you would never have been jealous and wanted me.Oh God, Im ranting now arent I? Am I making any sense at all?
Alice had listened to Danas words and kind of understood what the problem was. She knew that she had to make Dana feel better about this, as she really shouldnt be sad after the amazing thing that had just happened between them.
Dana, before this you were a different person, but so was I. I never thought you would have been in love with me since we first met, because I didnt even particularly like myself much when we first met. But to know that you have been is incredible, and I am so happy and privileged that you feel that way about me. People come together in different ways and like I saidI dont know exactly why Im ready for this now, but I am. I am willing to fight for you or to wait for you until you have sorted things out with Tonya, if thats worrying you too.
Dana glanced up at Alice, her eyes clearer now. I already finished it with Tonya. I want to be with you. I just wish that I had been cooler when we first met, so we could have spent these last 2 years doing this (she pulled Alices hips against hers again), rather than bickering at each other!
But the thing is Dana, that 2 years has made for great foreplay! Ive never been so hot for someone! When did you become so *****, huh?
The second you kissed me last night Dana replied. Alices heart leapt and the heat began to rise again making her breath speed up. The two stared at each other in silence, foreheads touching until Alice was able to speak again. I remember that day we first met, and you know, I was hot for you thenmaybe its just been lying there underneath the surface, just growing and growing for all this time.
Tell me about itI want to hear you tell the story, but not how youd tell the others, just tell it to me Dana requested.
Okaywell I remember it was sunny, but not too hot, just warm enough that I was loving the fact that the sun was on my skin and I was out of the office for a change and then just to make my day even better, I saw this amazing looking woman, in a short white skirt, legs up to her *****, walking ahead of me, swinging her tennis bag. Oh my, that was a sight Alice chuckled to herself, remembering now the way shed stared at Dana that day.
Dana let her hands drop to settle on Alices waist, and pulled her in closer, building up the heat between them even more. Keep going she pleaded.
Alice cleared her throat and continued her story
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Love this story…. please post again soon!!? :)
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Yikes. Even them just talking is HOT! :D