TiBetteShipper says August 4, 2004 at 2:08 am I am totally enjoying this story! Great job, Elvish!! Log in to Reply
tinawho? says August 4, 2004 at 9:08 am Oh boy I could feel the sexual tension from here…awesome El…I’m really liking your version of their beginning…please continue soon!!! Log in to Reply
halfofone says August 4, 2004 at 10:08 am Sleep?!! Very overrated. What tinawho? said. Log in to Reply
p says August 4, 2004 at 10:08 am oh this is so great!!! can’t wait for the next!!! so post soon! Log in to Reply
eve604 says August 4, 2004 at 10:08 am Love the fic! I mean can u say “sexual tension?” plz continue! Log in to Reply
Nickel says August 4, 2004 at 10:08 am Wonderful story hanging us all on the edge of our seats. Can’t wait to read whats next. Log in to Reply
liz says August 4, 2004 at 10:08 am very good. what is the matter with the bikini top bette? start at the top and slowwwwly work your way down!keep going elv! Log in to Reply
Just Once says August 4, 2004 at 10:08 am Yes, indeed! I love this story about B&T meeting. The beach scene was so much fun – love your writing – please continue and soon! Log in to Reply
asalways says August 4, 2004 at 11:08 am I like the slow way you are moving with this. Can’t wait for your next post. Log in to Reply
shelley says August 5, 2004 at 12:08 pm i really like this story. i look foward to reading more. Log in to Reply
techgal says August 5, 2004 at 12:08 pm “Nah…I just want to get in that bikini bottom…” Thanks for giving Bette some humor and color! She’s usually portrayed as either angry, horny or crying. Thanks! Love the beach location. Log in to Reply
I am totally enjoying this story! Great job, Elvish!!
Great story Elvish
Oh boy I could feel the sexual tension from here…awesome El…I’m really liking your version of their beginning…please continue soon!!!
This is fun. Please post another soon!.
Sleep?!! Very overrated. What tinawho? said.
oh this is so great!!! can’t wait for the next!!! so post soon!
Love the fic! I mean can u say “sexual tension?” plz continue!
Wonderful story hanging us all on the edge of our seats. Can’t wait to read whats next.
very good. what is the matter with the bikini top bette? start at the top and slowwwwly work your way down!
keep going elv!
Yes, indeed! I love this story about B&T meeting. The beach scene was so much fun – love your writing – please continue and soon!
I like the slow way you are moving with this. Can’t wait for your next post.
very nice story – keep it going…
i really like this story. i look foward to reading more.
“Nah…I just want to get in that bikini bottom…”
Thanks for giving Bette some humor and color! She’s usually portrayed as either angry, horny or crying. Thanks! Love the beach location.
sea; should be seal
Love this story!!!!!!!!!!