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Why, Bette? (Part 6)
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The next morning, Bette walked down the hall in her light blue robe. “Tina?” she called out.
“In here, babe.”
Bette walked into the kitchen to find Tina sitting at the kitchen table staring at the laptop monitor and scribbling something on a pad of paper.
“What are you doing?”
“I think I solved our problem.”
“Really? Let me call Suzanne and Dan and cancel our appointments.” Bette laughed, then asked seriously, “What problem is that?”
“That big elephant in the bedroom. Our bed. This morning when I got up, I got online and ‘googled’ furniture and bed. I think I found some good ones. Take a look.
Bette walked over and stood behind her. She bent down and kissed her cheek, then nuzzled her neck.
Tina turned to kiss her. “Ooh, cool mint.”
Bette marveled at the softness of Tina’s lips, but she was distracted when her eyes landed on the monitor. “That’s nice.”
“Yeah, but it isn’t my first choice. Take a look at this one,” she said, going back to the keyboard and clicking to the site. “What’d you think?”
“Furniture for Environmentalists. They’re kidding, right?”
“No, read the description.”
“Solid mahogany frame. Adjustable headboards, very edgy. Asian-influenced. Very cool.” She furrowed her brows in puzzlement. “Why do these people have a picture of our bed?” She laughed again. “Let’s order it.”
“Well, I was thinking we might go look at it. There’s a furniture store on LaBrea that carries it.”
“All right. The store probably opens at Noon. What do you say we do breakfast or brunch, then go over and take a look?”
“Sounds like a plan. Do you want to eat at the Planet?”
Bette walked over to the Senseo coffee maker and turned it on for a cup. She leaned against the counter, facing Tina. “Umm, no, not really. For now, Tina, if you don’t mind, I’d rather keep our process to ourselves. I’m just not comfortable with everyone knowing or speculating about every little detail of our lives.”
“That’s fine. Speaking of everyone, how are you feeling about our friends?”
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Portia, your story is pure genius. Congrats on finishing, and I so look forward to reading more of your writing in the future.
Portia just read your series excellent!!
Please write some more. Wonderful series.
I have been patiently waiting for your new chapter, wow was I blown away. I just Loved how you told your story with so much love along with the heartache that a couple feels with infidelity. It is the most intimate betrayle ones partner can do. It opens up so many doubts which you have explored thru your story along with ” we all have our own stories of our childhood” you also explored that thru your story which tells a lot how one’s behavior is in a relationship. I hope that you write more for us readers to enjoy. Thank-you very much.
This series was amazing!!!!
Portia, I just hope that my We are Family! Series comes out a fraction as good as this series was. You’re good, write some more, please! :D
Such detail, such intensity, such love…you just let it all out with full humility…I hope you find time to give us a deeper look into your delicious imagination…I’m a true Portia fan forever!!!
excelent story
PortiaOnly, you did an astonoshing work…really truly amazing…i think it’s the best confrontation between bette and candace that i read – ” fucking is not a relationship”…really cool and strong…too bad you finished…
Portia–This series has been so incredibly well done. Your final chapters were well worth the wait. Hope that we can look forward to more great work from your talented self.
Brava!!
This is a great and captivating fanfic!! Are you sure it is the end? There are still loose ends like Bette not wanting to discuss her mother with the therapist yet, couple counseling (is it over?), hot love-making on the night of exchanging rings…you know :)
u r an amazing writer . u truly moved me and made it all seem so real . thank u for your creativity . i only wish the writers and the producers of TLW r able to create such truth, deepth, insight, dignity, and determination to rebuild their characters broken trust.
Portia, you are an incredible writer with amazing talent. This was written so beautifully, I was moved to tears on more than one occasion. Thank you so much for sharing your gifts with us. I eagerly await your next story.
Thank you for the final chapter. This story tops my list…
Great work!
I’ve greatly enjoyed you story.You’ve done a great job making us feel all the emotiona that Bette&Tina feel or felt.
Portia – I loved your tory – I printed the whole thing out & read it like a novel – you write so fluidly and handle powerful emotion and angst so well and then wrap it all up neatly – what more could we ask for – a good meaty read – I admire greatly the ability to get into the head of a character – I can’t write for Toffee – but I read avidly. Please do create more of this quality – I’ll start your next story & keep looking out for your name. Thanks
Bravo! Very well done! Your descriptions were fantastic. I will keep an eye out for more of your work.
Just find out your story….
Woah, you are gooood!! Words can not describe the feelings and thoughts that keeps running through my body, heart and mind everytime I read the lines of emotions between B&T!
I’m gonna read all your stories!
Please, keep up the good thing going and THANK YOU PORTIA, for sharing!!!