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Who Would Have Thought? Chapter 34
Story written on October 6, 2007 by x_krusty.
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Tina’s Side
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"How’s Bette?" My mom asked me.
"She’s fine." I answered.
"Good." Mom said.
"Dad will finally be happy." I whispered as I left mom on the living room.
Can I still believe in fate? In destiny? In forever?
I know that Bette is my destiny and I know that I want us to be together forever but how can I still believe in those things if my destiny, my fate and my forever is the one who broke it.
I attempted to call Bette, I miss her and I’m still in love with her. But what would I say to her? Plead for her love? Ask for forgiveness? But I didn’t do anything wrong!
Maybe she really did fall out of love for me. But why? How? She knows how much I needed her right now, I needed her now more than ever. Maybe it’s better this way, at least she told me the truth. I guess I should just move on.
BUT…
Fuck you Bette. Fuck you! How could you do this to me?
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Bette’s Side
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"How is she?" I asked Tina’s mom.
"She seems fine." Tina’s mom started. "Her dad is happier." Tina’s mom said. "Thank you Bette."
Why am I even talking to this woman? She’s the one that made me do this.
"Please take care of her. Just be with her always and don’t let her be alone. Okay?" I asked Tina’s mom.
The other line went silent.
"Hello?" I said wondering if Tina’s mom is still on the other line.
"You really love her don’t you?" Tina’s mom said.
"I do. Did you ever doubted me?" I asked her.
"No." Tina’s mom simply said. "I just admire your love for my daughter."
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Either Tina’s mom is a complete hypocrit, and she lies to Bette, either she is totally unconscious of what she did to her daughter… I mean, how can you sacrifice the hapiness of your kid for the well-being of your bigot husband… my grandfather was that kind of man… but the whole family, including my grandma, agreed to just hide him what he could not stand, or just not talk about it, and did not try to destroy the happiness of those whose life he disapproved… (being a strict catholic, homosexuality was not is only subject of “disapproval”, but as my grandma also was… and she considered charity and love as the first duty of a true believer :-))
Wouldn’t it be cool of Tina breaks down and picks up the phone to call Bette, and she overhears her mother already talking to Bette about how she is happy that Bette did as she asked and broke up with Tina? Seriously I’m loving this story. Please post again soon…you need to get them back together!
God to know that you are feeling better. The words I have for Tina’s mothr can not be said out loud, let alone be put on the screen for someone to read. Hope tina finds out what happened. PPS
Continue to Get Well. I just don’t see how Tina is going to be able to forgive her mom and Bette. I know the saying that love conquers all but Bette really hurt Tina. The forgiveness will be a slow go.Please Post Soon
Tina’s mom has made the choice to put her husband who is a jack*ss feelings before her daughter. When her husband dies anyway, and her daughter finds out what she did, I hope she’s happy with her decision. How her father can be happy only proves that his heart was always damaged and always will be.
Tina’s Mother created this mess she damn well better fix it. What if something happens to Tina’s Dad, then what Tina has nothing. Woman you are way too selfish. Bette you are a complete ass. Regardless of how much you truly love Tina this was just wrong. Okay I’m done ranting. Thanks for the update, and hope your feeling better.
Huh???? Now what’s with Tina’s mom??? PPS and hopefully it will be with this “misunderstanding” cleared up!!Thank youPS congrats on your nomination!!!
Tina’s mom is a bitch and stupid!
Seriously Tina´s mom is really annoiyng me! BAHHH! Now tu put things right she should say wath she tould to Bette! Great chapter , hope you get much better and PPS
I just have to say this…what kind of parent can be happy seeing his child in pain and how can her mother live with herself having helped instigate that pain. If that is parental love then Tina would be better without it. I hope her mom comes to her senses and tells Tina what is going on. Okay now x_krusty, I must say that you are doing a wonderful job with this story of yours and I can’t wait for each new chapter to be posted. Thanks!
Well, if Tina’s mom admires Bette’s love for Tina so much, why didn’t she just tell her husband to suck it up and deal?
when Tina hears of this, the shit will certainly hit the fan and I don’t give her wrong if she closes the book on her family
*still hoping and believing in them to get back together and how Tina will love Bette more after she heard the story whereby it’s the mother’s request for them to break up* but should Tina accept that? Ooo… rest more and get well soon :)
Hello x_krusty, here I am sitting in front of my computer at 2 am in the morning, listening to Flyleaf, working out the courage to continue with my first fan fic attempt and pleasantly surprised to find another chapter of your amazing story. Thank You, please take care of yourself and get better. You Rock. Sincerely, JC
hello there my friend be well soon, thank you for taking the time to write this even when you are sick, well what can i say i feel very sad because of this i don’t know how they are going to survive, poor tina i can imagine how she must be feeling, it kind of reminded me of my self when the person who i love the most ended everything between us because she was under alot of presure from her family it totally broke my heart…I hope that they will get back togather soon.