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What Time Can DoPart 16
[Bette is pacing back and forth throughout the house. I havent heard from Tina all day, I better call her.]
[Tinas cell phone is buzzing on the coffee table.]
Alice: (Picking up the phone to see whos calling)Oh *****! Its Bette. What should I do?
Shane: Answer it.
Alice: What should I say?
Shane: Uh, hello would work.
Alice: (Shooting Shane a look)Funny.
Alice: (Answering the phone)Hi.
Bette: (Not realizing Alice answered instead of Tina)Hi baby, Ive missed you today.
Alice: (Deciding to toy with Bette)Hi honey, Ive missed you so much since yesterday.
Bette: (Now realizing its Alice not Tina)Damn it Alice! Wheres Tina?
Alice: (Laughing)Uh, shes tied up at the moment, but Ill have her call you back.
Bette: What do you mean shes tied up?
Alice: Just what I said Porter, now hang up. Shell call you back.
[Tina has now entered the living room.]
Alice: Never mind, here she is. (Handing Tina the phone and mouthing Its Bette.)
Tina: (Smiling and taking the phone and heading back into the bedroom)hey babe, how was your day?
Bette: Good, I missed you. (Pause) What are you doing?
Tina: (Not sure how to answer that)Um, Alice and I were talking.
Bette: Alice said you were tied up.
Tina: Oh, I was, sort of.
Bette: (A little confused)T., is there something youre not telling me?
Tina: (Trying to hide but not really succeeding)No, we were talking but I was out of the room when the phone rang. Thats all, she was just being Alice. (Trying to change the subject)What are you doing?
Bette: Im sitting here missing you. Can I come over?
Tina: (Now very nervous)IumI promised Alice I would hang out with her tonight. Shes been a little down about Dana today. (Not a complete lie, Tina says to herself.)
Bette: Poor Alice, her time will come. Is there anything we can do?
Tina: I dont think so, Im just going to stay here tonight.
Bette: (A little disappointed)Ok, can I see you tomorrow?
Tina: (Trying to hide her excitement)Yes! You couldnt keep me away. Ill call you tomorrow.
Bette: Until then, my love.
Tina: Goodnight Bette, I love you.
Bette: Goodnight T., I love you too.
[Tina comes out of the bedroom.]
Tina: (Addressing the group)That was a close one.
Alice: What did she want?
Tina: Me! She wanted to come over and see me.
Dana: (Smiling)Ah, how sweet.
Alice: Oh *****! What did you tell her?
Tina: I told her to come over and join the party. (Pause) What do you think I told her? (Pause) I told her I was hanging out with you tonight.
Kit: (Interrupting their banter)Tina, what exactly are we doing here anyway?
Tina: (Walking over to the couch to join the girls)Guys, I need your help.
Alice: Spill it TK, whats going on?
Tina: Ok, here goes yall know Bette and I have been back together for a month now
Group: We know!
Tina: (Smiling)Guys!
Alice: Skip the kinky details, just tell us what were doing here.
Tina: Ok, ok, fine. Im ready guys, really ready.
Shane: Ready for what Tina?
Tina: (Taking a deep breath)I want my wife back. I want Bette back completely.
Alice: What are you saying?
Tina: (Pulling something out of her pocket)I want to ask Bette to marry me. To re-marry me.
[Tina opens the jewelry box to reveal a set of rings with three diamonds set in the bands.]
Tina: (Pointing to the rings)Each diamond represents a part of our relationship, the past, the present and the future.
Shane: Wow, Tina! Those must have set you back a lot.
Tina: Since I went back to work, I really havent had anything to spend my money on. Why not spend it on us?
Kit: Thats great Tina.
Shane: Yeah, thats great.
Dana: Ditto, great!
Alice: What do you need us for?
Tina: When Bette proposed to me on the pier, she took my breath away. (Pause) I want to return the favor. She has been so amazing, so attentive, soI cant even tell you. She really has changed and I cant imagine my life without her.
Alice: (Shyly smiling)Are you saying what I think youre saying?
Tina: Yes, I want to ask Bette to marry me on the pier where we were first engaged.
[Everyone is overjoyed and happy, and hugging everyone. When Alice and Dana hugged the rooms attention shifted to them as their hug outlasted everyone else.]
Shane: (Leaning towards Alice and Dana)(clearing her throat)You two can pick this up after we leave.
[The two immediately broke their hug.]
Alice: We were just celebrating Tinas news!
Tina: (Poking some fun)Uh huh, sure Al!
Alice: Tina! We were!
Tina: (Trying to shift the conversation)Anyway, I need your help. I have an assignment for each of you, if youre willing.
Kit: Whatever you need baby girl, well do it.
Tina: If she says yes, I want to marry her right then and there.
Kit: Girl, you know my baby sis will say yes.
Tina: Im counting on it.
Dana: What do you mean right then and there?
Tina: Heres where yall come in. I want to ask her on the bench at the pier, but I want the ceremony near the water.
Alice: (Interrupting)I did this story on people becoming Ordained Ministers on-line. During my research, I did it. (As everyone looks at her like shes crazy) I became an Ordained Minister. I could marry you and Bette.
Shane: (Shocked)Youre a minister? Wow, Im impressed.
Dana: Al, I had no idea.
Alice: (Sliding next to Dana)Theres a lot you dont know, but in time you will.
[Alices statement causes Dana to blush.]
Tina: Thats great Al! It would mean a lot to us. (Turning to Kit)You have the hardest job.
Kit: I had a feeling this was coming.
Tina: I need a couple things from you. (Pause) First, I need you to get Bette to Pier 13 and dressed to the nine.
Kit: I can handle that, but why do I feel that will be the easy part?
Tina: I need you to get Bette to take our rings off her necklace. I have something in mind for them.
Kit: Girl, you know she hasnt taken them off sinceI dont think thatll be possible.
Tina: Well go over the details later.
Tina: (Turning to Dana)Dana, can you and Shane get everything set up?
Dana: No problem, just give us the details.
Tina: Thanks you guys! You dont know how much this means to me. (Pause) We dont have a lot of time so everything must fall into place. And no one (turning to Alice) NO ONE says a word to Bette.
Alice: (Mimicking the motion)These lips are sealed.
Dana: (Poking fun at Alice)This I got to see!
Alice: Dana, Ill show you these lips up close when everyone leaves
Dana: (Embarrassed)Alice!
Kit: (Shifting the conversation)When are you going to fill us in on the details?
Tina: Im meeting Bette tomorrow. Ill call you guys afterwards so we can set the plan in motion.
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Awsome! Now I’m excited for the ceremony as well!
ohhh…really exciting…
awww thats really sweet that tina is doing all that.
a beach wedding. how sweet! love is in the air!
great keep it coming
I’m jittering with excitement, can’t wait.
I can’t wait for their wedding and a hot honeymoon loveeeee.
What a great idea, you totally have me caught up in the moment.
Wow, now this is the Tina we all know and love! Can’t wait for the next!
Love it! Great Story! Please continue.
Luv this story!!
This story is gret I’ve read it several times where’s the next chapter!!!!!!