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True love – Chapter 11
Shane’s POV
When I woke up I saw that Carmen must have unpacked my stuff. She left a note on the table, saying that she’s at the grocery store since there’s nothing in the fridge. I couldn’t believe how lovely she was. She’s not only hanging out with me, she also cooks, unpacks my stuff and shops. I didn’t know how to thank her.
Suddenly I heard a child screaming, I knew it had to be Angelica so I went next door. Bette opened up.
“Hey Shane. Come in. I just wanted to get into the pool with Angelica.”, Bette said.
I took a seat in the garden.
“So, how are you feeling?”, Bette asked.
“I’m cool. I got used to those crutches already. But I can’t wait to get back to work.”
While I was talking to Bette I had Angelica on my lap who put her hand on my mouth and I pretended to eat her hand by taking her fingers into my mouth. Her laugh was so adorable, I love kids because little things can make them happy and the give you the brightest smile. I had to think of Shay which made me a bit sad. Bette must have noticed that.
“Did you talk to your dad about Shay?”, she asked.
“No…not yet.”, I said.
“But you won’t give up, right?”, she wondered.
“No. Of course not. He’s my brother and my father is an ass. He can’t take care of Shay and I just love that kid, I don’t know what to do without him.”, I told her.
Bette nodded and took Angelica. They went into the pool and Angelica laughed and cried happily.
“So…what’s going on with Carmen?”, she asked.
I frowned and shrugged.
“Nothing, we’re just friends from now on. I think that’s the best thing we can do.”, I said.
“Really?”, she asked ironically looking at me.
I knew by the look of her that she didn’t believe me. But what should I tell her, it’s the truth.
“And what’s going on with Paige now?”, she asked.
“I don’t know. She wanted to give me the time to figure out what I want. I don’t know what I want, but I know that I don’t like her the way she likes me. I just…I don’t know how to tell her that I don’t want to be with her. She’s such a nice girl, I really don’t want to hurt her feelings.”, I said.
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(46 votes, average: 4.09 out of 5)
I liked it b/c it shows what the characters are thinking through description as well as dialogue. If you can accept a philandering Shane then she’s the girl for you. LOL. PPS.
Welcome back! Hoo c´mon Carmen we all know that you want Shane and Shane wants you! xDGreat chapter and please post more soon! :D
reading your description of shane…accurate…now help her find true love…
man please continue like now im loving itttttttttt
Very nice chapter. I think you’ve nailed the feelings of all parties. I don’t believe Shane is incapable of being in a long term monogynous relationship like many do. I think there’s reasons why she isn’t good at, hasn’t been successful at it, but I think if those reasons are addressed then she will be able to. I won’t tell you what I think those reasons are but I’d love for you to draw your own conclusions and make her work through them. Anyway, really enjoyed this chapter. Thanks for writing and posting!
Wow!!! This is a great story this is almost exactly how i imagined the storyline would be if sarah/carmen hadn’t left the l word. can’t wait for more!!