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    The winner or the loser….Ch20


    As they were driving to LA docks ….Sam whispered in Bette’s ear “Hey look she’s sitting right next to you don’t you just want to touch her ….yeah that’s right think about touching Candace your loving it” she smiled

    Bette wispered back “You mint want to stop talking about things that you know nothing about you got me?”

    Sam : “Got ya” she said out loud Tina looked back at them…..

    Tina : “You got who?”

    Sam : “Oh nothing just thinking out loud”

    Tina : “Oh”

    They finely got to the docks it was 10…….they all got out of the cars payed the drivers and the caps lefted……..

    Bette : “Couldn’t you have gone in one of the other caps?” she wispered to Candace.

    Candace : “Tina asked me to come with you guys” she wispered back.

    Bette : “You know if Tina asked you to kill yourself would you do that?” she wispered again Candace didn’t say anything…

    Shane : “Holy *****…..(They all looked up at the Magnificent white and sliver ship)….It look great in the photo”

    Alice : “It look’s even better now”

    Dana : “***** you can say that again”

    Shane : “Yeah and that’s not the only good looking thing” she pointed at a lot of very hot looking women who were all getting on the ship.

    Alice : “Holy ***** come on let’s go”

    Sam : “Oh god this so ***** well sucks”

    Amanda : “Yeah and so do you” she said walking pass her, Sam didn’t really look to happy…..


    They all waited in line to get onto the ship…..more and more women same to come every minute

    Tonya : “Oh my god I am so exausted right now”

    Dana : “Yeah we all are”

    Jenny : “Wow so many women”

    Shane : “Yap and we’re all going to be on this ship”

    Sam : “Oh great”

    Kit : “Oh come on girl you’ll have fun”

    Sam : “Some how I don’t think so”

    Amanda : “Well you wont if you talk like that”

    Kit : “Yeah she’s right”

    Bette : “Mmmmm sweetie you got the tickets?”

    Tina : “Yep right here” she showed Bette the tickets.

    Jenny : “Have you got your ticket Lenore?”

    Alice : “Please say no”

    Lenore : “Right here” she showed Alice

    Alice : “Damnit”

    Shane : “Come on Al it wont be that bad”

    Alice : “Yeah that’s what Tina said”

    Tina : “Yeah and I’m right”

    Finely they got to the door and a woman looked at the tickets …

    The woman : “Ok go to that desk over there” she poined at a desk

    Bette : “Why?”

    The woman : “First calss”

    Kit : “Wow ok” the woman looked at ticket Lenore the others started walking over to the desk.

    Lenore : “I’ll cya guys later ok” she yelled

    Alice : “Ok Mom…(they all waved)….Thank god”

    Jenny : “Wow look at this place”

    Shane : “Yeah ….Hey I’ve never been first class before”

    Jenny : “I’ve never been on a ship before”

    Bette : “Your not the only one”

    Amanda : “God so many people about”

    Candace : “More like so many women”

    Sam wispered to Bette “Oh look your girlfriend is looking up other women”

    Bette : “Shut it Sam”
    They walked up the the desk there was a couple of people infront of them…..

    Dana : “Wow this place is beautiful”

    Tonya : “Yeah ladies we’re gonna have some fun”

    Kit : “We better”

    Amanda : “I think you can count on it”

    Woman : “Next please”

    Tina : “Hi” she gave the woman the tickets….

    Woman : “Ok I need all your names…” They all gave the woman there names……..

    Woman : “Ok ….Rachael” she called a young woman over.

    Rachael : “Yeah?”

    Woman : “These ladies need showing to there room”

    Bette : “Wait room…..don’t you mean rooms”

    Woman : “Oh it’s one room but it have’s 5 bedrooms in it”

    Alice : “5 bedroom’s ….hello there’s 11 of us”

    woman : “Look this is the room that’s booked down for you guys ok”

    Tina : “That’s fine” they all put there bags on the luggage trolley and Rachael pulled it to the elveter .

    Shane : “They have elveters on ships” she said as they got in”

    Rachael : “You will be surprised of what they have on ship’s”
    The elveter went up to the 5th floor and they all got out…..

    They all followed Rachael to there room she stopped at room 210…she unlocked the door and went it they all followed…..

    Rachael : “Welcome to your room”

    Shane : “Holy ***** this place is better than where I live”

    Kit : “Take a looked at that massive Tv”

    Sam : “Oh cool it’s got a DVD player and a PS2 maybe this trip wont suck that much”

    Amanda : “Great that will shut you up for the tirp will it?”

    Sam : “Yeah it would if there were some DVD’s and Games……”

    Rachael : “Oh you have to order the games and DVD’s…and someone will bring them to you”

    Sam : “Oh ok”

    Alice : “Look at this CD Player”

    Kit : “Great we can have music…I’m happy”

    Candace “Wow it’s got a mini bar” Bette walked up to Rachael who had taken all of there bags off the luggage trolley.

    Bette : “Thanks a lot” she gave her a tip.

    Rachael : “Thanks …have a good time oh and if you need anything just ring all the numbers are by the phone” she smiled and walked out and closed the door.

    Dana : “Wait this place has a Phone gezzz it is better than where Shane lives”

    Shane : “Oh ha ha really funny Dana”

    Jenny : “Hey guys look…(she opened two door’s)….we have a belcony”

    Tonya : “Ok that’s something I didn’t know you could have on a ship” they all walked out on to it….

    Amanda : “Wow look at that view” They all looked over the deep blue ocsan ….

    Jenny : “Now I could wake up and see that every morning”

    Kit : “Yeah me to” they all smiled at that thought.. except for Sam who didn’t really care all she wouldn’t to do was get ordering some games and DVD’s ………………………..


    TBC……………………………………..

    Comments

    1. This is good and found some funny thing about Alice and her mom, Sam and Bette, and Bette talk to Candace! Love it please keep coming can’t wait to see what happen on the ship! Thank you!

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