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The Journey 37
Tina: I look up and make direct eye contact with Bette. “Things have changed Bette.”
Bette: “I can see that” I say rather snidely. “So you do know what I am talking about then.” It’s a statement that requires no response. “Was there just us when we wereor is that something you did with
Tina: I remain silent.
Bette: “Because Tina, I tell you now, I love you and want to give my self to you, emotionally and sexually but I am not interested in ownership. Do you understand what I am saying to you?” I am getting angry. “Did you let
Tina: And now Bette has gone too far. “No Bette I did not give myself to her.” I say defiantly as we stand face to face, Bette still has her arms crossed and I have mine on my hips. “Not that it would be any of your ***** business.”
Bette: “***** is about right Tina because that sure as ***** was not making love.”
Tina: “OK, OK. I admit it. There was a little pay back, there was a little making you mine again. I am not the passive bed partner you are used to Bette. What did you expect? You humiliated and embarrassed me Bette when you fucked another woman.”
Bette: I am stunned, she just came right out and admitted it. I study her expression, genuinely confused. “Which you apparently will never let me forget. I expected us to make love Tina. You got what you came for, your payback.” I start to pull my clothes on, pants first and not the least bit intimidated by the new Tina. “The thing is Tina, the joke is on me because I really did give myself to you.”
Tina: “Bette, please, you have got this all wrong Bette.”
Bette: “Have I, how is that Tina? What part have I got all wrong? The part where I humiliated and embarrassed you, so you thought you’d do that to me, here tonight?” and I am looking for my shoes, which seems silly really because we are inside.
Tina: I reach out and grab Bette’s arm to make her stop. “Stop” I demand. “You’ve got quite a lot of it wrong Bette.”
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(56 votes, average: 3.88 out of 5)
please continue….
grt!!!!!! update
Please continue!!! I am glad Bette said what she was feeling and Tina too but they need to equals not dominate each other..zpost soon.
wow you scared me for a bit…great as always post soon please :o)
no more scary things like that. On with the new found happiness. Please post soon
Great update. Looking forward to more.
I’m agreeing with Lauren25, don’t you ever scare me like that again and get on with the new found happiness, they deserve it! great update! post soon please!
Thank you for that chapter because I was thinking what Bette was thinking and not really liking it much…I’m also glad that it god resolved as it did as it could have been another blowup…
I think it’s a milestone chapter for their renewed relationship. I accept and like Tee’s explanation. And I’m happy to see such an ending.
I have followed your story along theway and until now have been a silent reader. Anyway, just wanted to weigh in on this. I definately don’t like Tina’s explanation. Forgiveness is a beautiful thing and revenge is something different. If Tina has not truly forgiven Bette for her indiscretion then they should not travel this road. If she has forgiven Bette then their would be no need for revenge. I think Bette should have not conceded quite so easily and could have probed further to better determine their current state and whether or not she has truly been forgiven.
well, that was close…i did understand tina’s explanation and even though bette might concider to ask more questions, i think tina truly loves her and next time it will be love making that they both crave
moho & missyang who knows what the future holds. Positives & negatives from the explanation that may yet get explored…..
After her passionate abdication, it seems that Bette still leads the dance, does she? Captivating as usual Unbeknown, thank you ;-)
Yeh you scared the S**t out of me for a while there. Great chapter please give us the next one soon
i like tinas explanation. wonderful that they could discuss this and they listened. how nice is that. thanks.
I’m not getting it Bette should be apologizing why??
Great post. They both needed to exercise that demon…but they need to remember their renewed marriage is based on equality not domination. Please post soon.
Yeah you scare me too and now let the happy come. Ok post soon please, thanks!
wow that was intense… great job… i can see Bette’s anger and doubts… wait to see if Tina really forgave Bette (now I’m not so sure) and if Bette fully accepted Tina’s explanation (I did)… thanks
Unbeknown…Great writing. So intense. I love your ability to really give detail to the story and their thoughts but the last 2-3 paragraphs confused me. I understood that Tina was showing Bette that she was going to an equal partner to Bette in every way, in this case, the bedroom. However, why did Bette apologize to Tina, when Tina really tried to sexually subjugate Bette with the use of handcuffs, etc. ? help me out here. After all, Bette said she understood equality not ownership. Thx.
Tina. This woman is the mother of a minor child? Kink-kee!!! If I were Bette, I’d be very afraid…
I totally agree with honda90….”because I was thinking what Bette was thinking and not really liking it much”. I’m so glad to see the way this chapter ended and please continue…
Bette really did need to say that, the situation can’t be changed by having Tina trying to dominate Bette so she feels secure. I had a feeling Bette wouldn’t like it very much but now I think they should just move on together as equals.
at the beginning of this chapter u described what Bette used to do to Tina to claim ownership so as the song says “I learnt from the best”; and T took control and really Imo Bette got angry after the fact because she fears losing control,so yes she should apologies for all the times she made T submit which you describe 2 of and allude to more…because that submission carried on out of the bedroom and filled the parameters of their relationship until T lost her identity…T is saying I want u Bette but as equals…I will not submit again unless you do…I thought this was one of the best B & T chapters I have ever read…it truly defines their new relationship, T is no longer Bette’s bumboy to put it bluntly…and I think she well and truly learnt her lesson about how that feels to be dominated, great stuff