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    The Island – Chapter 14

    The next couple days passed quietly.  Dana and Alice had many conversations and opened up on their pasts.  Dana remained on bed rest except for occasional trips to the bathroom.  Alice joined her for meals and they slept next to each other in the big bed.  The bond they were developing deepened with every hour.

    Five days after the beating, Brad came by to check on Dana.  He was pleased with her progress and gave her the green light to move around as she wanted to, but, to take cues from her body on what was too much.  She was still on strict orders to not do any hard exercise.  However, she could do some short walks.  Dana was thrilled to have some of the restrictions lifted.  Alice was less excited.  While she was happy to hear Dana was getting better, she was concerned that Dana would want to move back to the barracks.  She hadn’t told her yet that all her stuff had been moved to the suite next door.

    Alice sat down next to Dana on the bed after Brad left.

    “Good news, huh?”

    “It is.”  Dana gave a winning smile.  “It is so weird to not be active.  I can’t wait to just move around more.”  At Alice’s disapproving look she added.  “I know…  I know…  I don’t plan to do anything to active.  I really don’t want to add to my recovery time by doing too much too soon.”

    Alice smiled back and then lowered her eyes and started playing with the bedcover.  “I was wondering if maybe you might want to celebrate tonight?  Maybe dinner sitting at an actual table and a movie?”  Her question was met by silence.  Alice finally peeked out from under her bangs and was met with another of Dana’s bright smiles.  “That sounds excellent, Alice.”

    Alice grinned back.  “It’s a date, then.  Does six work for you?”  She asked seriously.

    Dana burst out laughing.  “Yes.  I think I can free up my schedule.”  Alice saw the ridiculousness in her question and laughed herself.  “Well, good, I was worried it might be too short of notice.”

    Once they both calmed down Dana asked.  “Do you think I could borrow something to wear?  I’d rather not be in one of these hospital gowns for dinner…” 

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    1. Awwww….This is like the sweetest movie. I can seriously vividly see what is going on. :) I regret that their perfect kiss should end that abruptly, but my goodness! They are cuddling together like goodness-knows-what. I think they should get married right now. :) PPS

    2. how cute is Alice being embarressed for being rich…hehe Dana jumping in front of Al to protect her from the microwave, which I totally want that’s the coolest effing thing….hmmm drama coming for the lovely ladies if that memory has too last awhile. Great fricking chapter!!!!!

    3. MaGooses: Thanks for another wonderful update! Have I told you how much i love ou building their relationship, because it is so heartwarming. They are just too cute. I’m happy to see that Dana is on the mend.

    4. Yup, actually we are a bunch of smiling fools.. and I wouldn’t have it any other way :) My mind never wanders anywhere *huge wink* and yes, my halo is still in place thank you very much :). Things just need to be simple in the mornings, it’s just better that way or they confuse me too much. Ok, on to comment on the story. I loved it as always, yup waring that stupid ‘daw’ grin again. It suits me, really :P. Hehe and Alice wanting Dana to recover fast *checking my halo again*. PPS??? Pretty please? :D

    5. Howdy Goose! I made it and just in time for the movie. “You know how I said nothing in the house scares me? Well I think I changed my mind. I am getting this fucking thing out of here tomorrow. That is too creepy.” LMMFAOWTIME! That was great, i’m glad everyone was out to lunch because that could have been the end for Akshun. I LOVEEEE how well things are progressing, damn injuries! Stopped my danish fantasy, but that’s ok. Thank you so much for another outstanding update! Loves You for it!

    6. wait – that memory would have to hold them over for awhile? what does that mean? is something bad going to happen? i agree with alice – that microwave is creepy. it sounds like it would be very confusing as well. well great update. that was really cute.

    7. Sorry MaGoose, I have a little trouble with Ms. naughty A lying about the moving D’s belongings. Although it was not a big deal, I hope she would not do it again. The rest of the post is just Danish awesome. I love the fact that their bond was deepening with very hour and they conversed at ease. The whole microwave scene was hilarious. Talking microwave, genius. lol when D try to protect A. Having said what I said at the beginning of this comment, I do appreciate A’s attentiveness towards D and it seemed endless as demonstrated again with setting up the movie and D’s room. I, HD, officially thank you for writing this incredibly romantic scene with them walking under the full moon. Like pandakse said, “vividly see what is going on”. I only wish they could spend a little bit more time on that private beach. Maybe you will consider bringing them back there in the future. Even though D was still in pain, I am confident that she would make a speedy recovery under A’s tender loving care. I mean it, “THANKS A MILLION.” This story rocks!!!!

    8. I so love this whole story. It’s so great. It makes me so happy. “Fast recovery.” After kissing Dana. I would want a fast recovery too to move on to ‘better’ things. LoL Haru didn’t get much sleep so she is silly. Anyway. As usual Goose. I love the story. It’s great. Keep up the amazaliting work.

    9. I freaking love this, “Kingdom of the Crystal Skull”? A got an early copy? How did you even come up with that? Amazing!!! Sorry I can’t comment on the rest because I got to go soon. But promise to do my job later tonight. Much later. Thanks a million!

    10. LOVE IT :) I always seem to say tht, althou not bad thing is it? lol. Again love how things are progressin with the two of them and love “Fast Recovery” Line from Al lol, No guessing why she wants tht lol. The ending was so sweet but im with Dananalice, why will that have to last them a long time? Is Gabby bitchface coming bak? Or is it simply becus Dana has to recover?? Ohhh now u got me thinking to much lol. LOVE IT ANYWWAY PPS :D XX

    11. Hey MaGoose! Thanks for posting again. You’re doing a fabulous job. The interaction between Al and Dana is so fucking sweet. They do belong together, I never doubted that. I wish IC wouldn’t have killed off Dana. The fans deserved more than that. I like the take of your story. Hope Dana heels soon….I’m sure, Al can’t wait either for that to happen, lol. Great update, MaGoose!

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