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Pleas don’t say it’s over!
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Tina curled her feet under her, and drew the blanket round her more tightly. Tissue in one hand and a crumpled photograph in the other.
She had been sitting like this for the last few hours, not bothering to switch any lights on, as the darkness crept through the windows. She had returned to her apartment, to find a message on her machine from Bette….
As she thought about it again, tears welled in her eyes, her stomach began to roll, she lurched from the sofa, scattering the blanket on the floor, as she lunged towards the bathroom. Throwing open the door, she threw the loo seat open, and let the contents of her stomach fill the bowl. Sitting back on her haunches, she wiped a hand over her forehead, scattering the beads of sweat that clung there…. She stood up and rinsed her mouth out with water from the faucet. Looking up into the mirror above the sink, she didn’t recognize the woman staring back at her..
Tina: Is it really over????
She went back to the front room, heading straight for the answering machine…. She hesitated slightly as her finger hovered over the play button. Steeling herself to what she would hear, she depressed the button…
“Message one, beep…………… Hi Tina, it’s Bette”
Tina: Like I’d ever forget that voice….
“I just wanted to call and say that I had arrived safetly in NewYork, Jodi was really happy to see me. I think we might be able to sort things out” There was a pause, and Bette cleared her throat ‘Tina, I just wanted to say thankyou for everything……I can’t believe it’s over.. Me and Jodi fly back in a week, so I will come over once we are settled and see Angie………………………………………Thanks again…. Your truly an amazing person”
Tina: It was defiantly there wasn’t it? It’s over!!!!!
Tina slunk back to the sofa and pulled the blanket back over her… her sobs were muffled by the fist she had in her mouth… biting at her knuckles…
Laying on the floor by the edge of the sofa was the photograph she had been clutching…
Her, Bette and Angie…. All smiling….. before it was all over…
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These two are meant to be together. They just need to take the leap. Excellent writing. PPS.
Much like Tina’s blanket, my stomach is now in knots. Heart wrenching. Very nice start. Please continue.
I’m glad you took the story out of your head and posted. I like the start, so emotional. Please continue.
bette should call tina again or tina should call her and talk…be honest with each other
Good start!
What great emotions. I kept telling myself Yes Bette call Tina again. These two certainly are on a star crossed path aren’t they?
Well that was a test of my emotions. I do hope that Bette calls Tina again and Tina has the guts to tell Bette how she feels. Thanks Great start. PPS
I hope this continues!
I find it hard to place Bette with anyone other than Tina. Their partnership is just.. Unique. Do continue.
Wow there is a lot of emotion there! I hope you do continue it..I’ll be patiently waiting! Thanks!
Yes, please continue. You can’t ignore what your heart keeps telling you. I hope Bette will realize that. PPS!
I recently posted my first story and know how it feels to get these comments. I’d say “survey says….Keep posting!” Next chapter in T minus 5, 4, 3, 2……you get the hint!!
Please continue with your story, brilliant start! and please don’t let them end!
Nice start… please do continue
too too sad…
So very much emotion.Bette is trying to hard to make it go with Jodi,When what she want and need is in LA Thanks