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Locked Up 11
Principal Officer Jim Fenner was taking purposeful strides up and down the hallway of Larkhall’s G Wing as he came to the end of a long shift. One by one, he looked the women up and down as he passed them, visualising the attractive ones without their clothes. Of course, half of the women didn’t fit in with his tastes. Too old, too fat….or just too damn dykey. But there were plenty of young women to keep his fantasies alive. Oh yes, Jim Fenner loved his job.
"Mr Fenner?" a posh accent interrupted his visualisations.
He turned and rolled his eyes.
"What is it Peabody?" he asked witheringly.
"I just wanted you to know that I’m going to be making a complaint about you"
"Oh really?" Fenner folded his arms "And what exactly is it that you’re going to be complaining about?"
"Taking an advantage of a vulnerable inmate" Helena too folded her arms and glared back at him.
"Pull the other one Peabody. I’m not interested" Fenner turned and started to walk away.
"Oi Fenner!"
Jim turned to find Alice Pieszecki marching up to him. He indiscretely looked her up and down, thinking that she could be quite attractive if she didn’t have such a mouth on her. Oh well, there were always ways to shut a woman up.
"What do you want?" he asked her.
"I want a word with you"
"Go on…"
"You think you’re the big man just coz you hold the keys to this place? You think you can just treat women like shit and get away with it?" she raged at him.
"I have no idea what you’re talking about Pieszecki" he turned to walk away.
"Don’t turn your back on me Fenner. I know what you get up to. And you’re not going to get away with it"
"Listen love" Fenner hissed, grabbing Alice by the upper arm "I suggest you back off"
"Touched a nerve have I?" Alice raised an eyebrow questioningly.
"Get in here" Fenner shoved Alice roughly into the nearest empty cell.
"What do you think you’re doing? This isn’t my cell!" Alice protested.
"Now listen here, you little bitch….you haven’t got a clue what you’re talking about, so I suggest you shut your mouth"
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(26 votes, average: 3.54 out of 5)
Maybe its me, but where’s that page covering they’re day?
What a great surprise to open up fanfiction tonight and find you had posted a new chapter to this most intriguing story. I appreciate the time it takes to transition from one place in life to another – but still look forward to the continuation of this story. Thanks for taking the time.
Great update, finally some alone time for B&T. Do you think we could get a little H&N in the next chapter, and when do we get to see Fenner bite the dust? PPS
coop that was the perfect question, i feel as if the chapter was chopped off. LOL on come bbaby PPS really soon
what a great update,you go girl(tina)show bette what your made of.it’s going to be HOT HOT HOT right bealsbay?pps
Can’t wait for Fenner to get his and to see T help B with her breakup issues!!! ;)
will we get to read about private visiting room? it better be soon :)
Great update!..my only criticism is that it’s too short!! Come on BealsBaby longer updates please?…We want more!!!
Wow back with a bang there!Why thanks you…i just wanted an update and new you must have been busy so glad that i could help though..I like it some proper alone time for Bette & Tina. She definetly is so torn up over her break up from Jodi.THANKX 4 THE UPDATE :)
Hahaha Tina is bad but love the way she do lol!
Hello BabaB -B, Great to have a new update from you. Love how the pressure is building on Fenner, especially as he doesn’t know waht is going on. Good to have the gals working together to take Fenner down. The tension is building as the plans come into place. Then the lightness and sparkle that Bette and Tina bring to prison is awesome. They are both so complete in working through and acting on their feelings. Their love just can’t be denied. Now I can’t wait to find out what exactly goes on during their counseling sessions. I am sure they will be getting hot and sweaty in the private room. Might even be some moans and crys. Really can’t wait now. I do want to have Nikki and Helen alone time too. Please continue this wicked tale. Many thanks from Your Loyal Fan.
You know bb that your story made me curious about bad girls i went on line and bought me the 1st season, i’m hooked i tell you, and only you to blame cuz there are no zone 1 dvd for the rest of the seasons, what should i do now, you just keep going with your story i luv it.
i wondered when you’ll update!! i really love this story!! hope you’ll update soon! :)
Oh i wonder what B&T will get up to in the privaqte visiting rooms ;-)Great update PPS