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It’s just lunch…9
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Tina stretched herself awake, rolling over to view the bedside clock.
“Oh shit.”
She’d forgotten to set the alarm and had slept much longer than she planned.
She sprang out of bed and got into the shower immediately. She would still have time to do some minor re-arranging before Bette arrived..
Her gallery was so sophisticated in its design, she didn’t want to have anything out of place.
She let the water rush over her and adjusted the taps so that it was as hot as she could stand it. It didn’t take long to wash and condition her hair, after which she took a couple of extra minutes to massage some liquid body wash over her stomach and hips.
She imagined it was Bette’s hands travelling over her. Nothing overtly sexual. Just sensual and affectionate.
She didn’t have time to waste however, so she was soon reaching for the fluffy towel that rested on the rack.
This was the first occasion they would have real privacy since they’d met. Tina’s mind raced at the possibilities.
She put on a robe and towel dried her hair before attending to the task of organizing the living room.
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“Make yourself comfortable,” Tina said. “What can I get you to drink?”
“We’ll have wine with dinner…if you have mineral water, that would be great,” Bette replied.
Tina returned with a bottle of Pellegrino and two glasses on a serving tray.
She poured them each a glass and, noting Bette’s position on the couch, took a spot not quite at the opposite end and turned to face her.
“You really look great,” Bette complimented. "No one would ever know you worked such long hours this week."
“I actually feel pretty good,” Tina replied. “I admit though, I got home at three this afternoon and had a nap. The day wound down earlier than I expected.”
Tina let her arm rest on the back of the couch as she held her drink with the opposite hand.
Bette turned as well and also extended her arm along the back of the couch. Their fingertips were almost touching as they spoke.
“Good, I’m glad to hear you’re well rested,” Bette said. “We won’t feel compelled to rush through dinner in order to get you home to bed.”
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They may have only held hands but my god was it hot. This story is amazing and realistic. Your dialogue is beautiful. Really appreciate the frequent updates!
Bette is so smooth, she knows when to fold and when to hold. This will be tough on both of them. thanks so much for posting
I’m glad they did’t jump in bed together. But you and Bette both have too much class for that. … A chapter a day keeps the L Word jones away. Thank god for all you fanfic writers, and SAVE AMY WINEHOUSE! …Thank you, Swim!
Hey fellow readers: If you like this story, you’re sure to enjoy the new one by Chelone. I think she and JKS are swimming in the same elite writer gene pool.
Wicked dreams… that is not where I feel warm… the slow burn. This is great. Huge fan of your writing, just sparse on commenting. Thanks for the updates! PPS!
Thanks for a great chapter…I am so enjoying your daily posts!!
Very great chapter! The build up is well writen, can’t wait for the next post !! :-)
Wow!! The buildup is delicious! Can’t wait for the next post!
The way you are describing the scenes through subtle details, their thoughts and dialogue, makes this story so delightful to read and really see these scenes in our minds. Thanks for updating. PPS Lucero & Marsha (JC’s Salsa Aunties from Mexico City)
Love. This. And I continue to be thankful for the steady stream of posts.
im sure they will enjoying spending the evening together. that was just an awesome chapter. love the way you write. thx
great, great…slow burn…oh wow!!!!!
I too, am frustrated as hell…more please…
Ugh! I’m dying! I need a kiss, some kind of physical contact…..Please. Great chapter!
Bette moved closer, but with no intention of kissing her.”I’ll see you tomorrow then,” Bette said.She was close enough that Tina felt her breath on the skin of her cheek. With a squeeze of her hand, Bette backed away without so much as touching her. She smiled and reached for the door handle.I’ll bet Tina is just kicking herself in the a** for not makeing the first move right here. Thank you, Md
I sure hope Tina remembers “he who hesitates is lost” for the swimming date. Given the same opportunity tomorrow, she just may want to take it. Swimmie you are brilliant…just brilliant at this!
I think they’ll both be having some wicked dreams tonight! PPS
Such a tease, lol. Great update.
It looks as it Tina is going to have to be the one to initiate the actual phyiscal part of their relationship. I look forward to the next post as much and Bette and Tina are looking forward to a more intimate time together.
I’m enjoying the slow burn. Why do I think when the sparks finally are given a chance, the results are going to be smokin’!
The anticipation is great. You weave a wonderful story. It doesn’t look like Bette or Tina is going to get any sleep
Oh Bette’s got Tina’s number and I think she is playing the perfect suitor. Tina’s dreams are going to be WILD.
Wicked dreams indeed! Love this can’t wait for more!
Swims, I’m usually on the run but I have been following the story closely. You’re one of those writers that no matter how busy I am, I make a quick stop to read their work. I have been checking the site every morning just to be welcomed by a post from you. You know I love your stories, and even though I may not leave a comment every time – do remember… I’m around! Thanks for this, I’m quite glad you make time to write even with all the studying you have to do! xx PPS
She’ll have wicked dreams when they see each other in swimsuits at Bette’s pool. Hopefully, they’ll act on their dreams. PPS.
I love the build-up. Can’t wait to read the next part! Thanks for posting.
bette is so sweet when she is taking her time for Tina’s sake. It seems that all Tina wants is for bette to take control of her! can’t wait for the swim. Bette and Tina in bikini’s? hmm
“‘My hand is not where I feel warm,’ Bette thought to herself”…LOL i love this story, slow build-up, conversations full of innuendoes…love it
I’ve always been a fan of the tease and slow burn in stories. PPS
Sorry for not being able to comment on your previous chapters. Life gets in the way sometimes:D Anyways, I’ve been following this story from the very first chapter and I’m thoroughly enjoying it. I could almost feel Tina’s frustration. Bette is really wicked when it comes to the game of seduction. PPS
awesome update!! love the slow build up!! :)PPS
Hey JKS, Another fine update. Good to have Bette and Tina taking Baby-steps. Trouble is that it seems like Tina is the one wanting the rampup the speed and race to a satisifying conclusion. I do think they are both feeling the heat of arousal when they are together. Please post more of this delicious drama tomorrow. Many thansk from Your Loyal Fan.
“I’m ready when you are,” Tina replied. => Uh-oh, brace yourself, Bette. Tina’s poised for the inevitable. This might be her first time with a woman but I think she won’t hesitate to go for the kill, so to speak. Maybe that’s why Bette didn’t kiss her this time. She’s not yet ready to unleash Tina’s desire. Not just yet. Thank you, JKS. I was grinning foolishly the whole time I was reading this.:> Looking forward to their private swimming party! ;>
Feel very spoiled by the steady stream of posts. Love the build-up. Wonder if Tina will have any problems sleeping. Look forward to more when you can.
No goodnight kiss…I’d be just wee bit frustrated myself…maybe we should see what Tina’s dreams are made of PPS
Love it! :)
hahaha, that was so cute and funny!
Damn, Bette is playing hardball. I kind of like when she is more at Tina’s mercy. Its funnier.. since she is so experienced. So, I hope Tina turns the teasing tables soon. Can’t wait for their next meeting.