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Great Unexpectations Chapter 25
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Previously…
Bette squeezed Tina’s thigh, keeping her eyes on the road, saying nothing.
"Bond girls, huh?", Tina teased. Bette let out a soft laugh and let her hand move up Tina’s thigh slowly. "T. Those women were all before I met you", she joked. "But come on. Pussy Galore? How can you not love that?"
Tina laughed in submission. "Guess you got a point." Her laughter soon turned quiet as Bette’s hand continued on it’s journey. Bette grinned smugly, feeling the affect she was having on Tina. The warmth emanating from Tina’s center and the halted breaths escaping Tina’s mouth were unmistakable. Tina leaned back in her seat, closed her eyes and moaned. "Babe. You’re either gonna have to get us home now, or pull over."
Bette smiled.
Chapter 25.
She glanced in the rearview window. No traffic behind them. Looking up ahead she saw only one car. She looked eagerly for a tiny nook to pull the car into. One that would provide the much-needed cover that was currently being denied by the late spring sun. Tina’s hand now covered Bette’s. Pressing it into her warm flesh. Urging it to venture under her skirt.
"Hold on sweetie", Bette whispered as she reclaimed her hand and brought it to the steering wheel. She turned down a desolate road that seemingly led nowhere. After about two hundred feet the pavement ran out, leaving the wheels of the Saab to make company with the newfound dirt road. Bette cursed silently as the dry dirt road kicked up dust under the speed of her tires. Dust that would soon be coating the clean finish of her car. That concern, however, took a backseat to Tina. And, of course, thinking the words ‘backseat’ and ‘Tina’ in the same sentence invigorated her search for a quick pull-over spot.
After another half mile of bumpy, dust-laden driving Tina spotted another smaller dirt road turning sharply to the right. "Right there", she said, pointing it out. Bette obliged and sharply turned the car into the narrow path. It was thankfully lined with trees that mushroomed with a full growth of leaves. The branches, thick with growth, were so expansive that the trees on the right side of the road met the trees on the left side of the road and formed a tunnel of sorts. Bette quickly pulled over and put the car into park. The sound of seatbelts unfastening competed with the sound of heartbeats pounding.
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That was hot and funny.
That was pretty funny. Sorry about the Tigers. I really wanted them to win the Wildcard over the Yankees. This is a lesson to everyone.. don’t fall asleep after car sex. PPS.
Very silly but very funny and nicely written pps.
Funny and sassy. You may feel uncomfortable writing NC -17s but you do a fine job. PPS. If you do the crime, you have to do the crime. In this case, it was worth it. LOL. PPS.
Gratuitous sex for shits and giggles? Honestly it’s not really my thing, but let me read this to see if I still feel the same. :)
LMFAO!!!!!!!!!!!! Definitely hot too. ;)
Very funny chapter!!!
I take back my comment about you not being nice, my dear red. You are too cute! Loved the gratuitous chapter… funny and oh so hot! Gotta love the car sex.
I don’t think God minded…She was probably looking down and laughing at them just like Tina was! You are too funny Red! Thanks you!
Too hot and too funny.
That was sooo funny and HOT. I am having to fan myself with my mouse mat…:0/ PPS
Damn, I wish I was on one of those vans. That was hot, steamy, and then funny as you know what. I know how you feel about the Tigers because the Cubs seem to be doing the same thing now.
That was hot and funny!
Very very clever!!! U r too much…hot also, extremely hot… that car sex always seems to get the fans going.
there’s always time for gratuitous sex in a serious writer’s life; just the right amount of levity coupled with the seriousness of the task they’ve undertaken; nicely sculptured!!!
That was very well written, so funny and hot. I can’t stop laughing.. PPS
Bible camp? Ha! Oh hell yeah, that was definitely worth whatever embarrassment they might be suffering, cos that was h-o-t. (And Bette’s poor Saab… ah well, worth it!) And what’s with all that angry horn-honking? I thought patience was a virtue? Thank you for indulging this horndog with the quick post, red. More when you can! (And commiserations on the Tigers, but it ain’t over til it’s over. Words I need myself… *both* of my teams got a drubbing yesterday.)
You know as a true Tribe fan I feel your pain but not too badly. I think Bette & Tina were just seeking a little devine intervention in their spontaneous expression of joy and happienss. They were just closer to the source then they realized. Watch those religious types they can come back to bite. Thanks for the great post.
Well done! I had to admit the summary was intriguing but I am so glad they “visited” the bible school the way they did! As for the Tigers, all I can do as a Michigander is grumble, or cry when I think of what happened to the Lions too! *grumbling* Good job on the story though….PPS.
Thank You! So funny & hot! Can’t wait for more. PPS!!
How can a scene that hot and funny ever be called gratuitous? It was infinitely more satisfying than the three seconds of Bette/Nadia car sex we got in S4. I love it when Bette frets about her precious Saab too.
Bravo, well done
Praise be for Bette and Tee!