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Almost Heaven 8
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Almost Heaven 8
You break my back
You won’t break me
All is black
But I still see
Shut me down
Knock me to the floor
Shoot me up
Fuck me like a whore…
Chapter Fourteen
So he is near. My vengeful murdering sibling to go along with my murdering ex somewhat girlfriend to accompany her ex use to be girlfriend who she maimed and maybe tortured with the worst offense next killing for the love of killing…..unrequited love.
Deep breath time.
I start to laugh. It starts like a smirk. A smirk that I think out loud. It gains speed and breath and becomes a chuckle, from the chuckle it gives birth to a hearty laugh maybe coming from somewhere within, my sides start to hurt. The warmth and cramping spread to my spine till I can’t take it anymore and tears come, confusion and wonder….are the tears made of pain?
“Shane?
“….wait…..don’t….talk…….”
“Shane?
Still laughing and crying….gimmie a minute….I think but I do not say.
Through my wet clenched eyes I see how this is not funny to Carmen. She looks alarmed. Like maybe there is a fire coming from the sky. Like maybe the sky is falling…only its not. I slow down, the pain stops, the cramps of jovial joy subside….I was catching my breath. What was so funny?
“Shane……why are you laughing?”
“Carmen………I am laughing because of the misfortune of being born into this…….. I am laughing because you killed my father, I am laughing because Tasha killed my mother, I am laughing because you almost killed Helena…for whatever reason…….ha….ha-ha……I am laughing because my brother forced himself on you, and almost killed you….and is responsible for wiping out the last bastions of civilized…..reality…. that is left in this burnt…..decayed…..and most of all dead…..world…..How you can not laugh at the….empty meaningless ways we have spent our lives……I mean….I love you…..and YOU…..killed MY……FATHER!……..I don’t know anyone……WHO WOULDNT LAUGH! DO YOU? CAUSE I SURE AS SHIT DON’T!”
“Shane……..are you in love with Helena?”
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Like always, You are the Best!!!! This storie for my is your best one, Thank YOU!!!!
I don’t like Shamus. Maybe it’s from Carmen but I think he is like the bad side of Shane. Like a evil one of Shane even though he didn’t do anything yet. Or did he? Thanks for fast and awesome update.
o god… lol i love thisssss
wow you’re on a roll, updating so frequently. as much as i love this, i am also dreadin the end since you said this is your final piece. anyway, I’m still waitin for more to be revealed, what is carmen’s role in this capture and who’s side is she on. poor thing, jenny has authority over her…interesting
Haha, I knew I recognized KMFDM.I wonder what will happen between Shane and Shay. Can’t believe Helena’s dead – if she is.* * * * *
huh…as always, such a well written ride…i’m a bit behind, also not unusual, so i’m going to have to go over some things (reading too fast) but damn, the mood you set, it’s just fantastic. and you know i’m up for anything and everything involving helena, though you always do give us a shane/carmen story to sink our teeth into…as a fellow apocalyp/futurist? writer, i applaud you for taking the genre to new heights with every chapter. incidently, helena’s an anarchist in one of my stories, so i loved that little song toss in. great work:)