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All you need is love – chapter 34
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Bette’s eyes told her all she needed to know – Bette felt the same
“Okay – better see what those three are doing in the garden – I’ll tell Josh he’s got 10 minutes as well. You two okay there? “
“Fine “
Tina went outside to find out what the other three kids were doing – it seemed to be some sort of baseball with a tennis racquet not a baseball bat. Josh was the lone fielder. She was quickly dragged into the game but after 15 minutes it became obvious that Josh was tired so Tina told the oldest two to keep the noise down while she took Josh in for Bette to settle him into his sleeping bag in the tent in the spare room. Bette had predicted that in the morning most of the kids would be asleep in there.
When she walked inside Bette and Madison were missing – Tina found them upstairs in the bathroom with Bette helping Madison into her pajamas. Tina grinned
“I’ll help this one get ready for bed “she said seeing that Bette was handling the little girl very well. Josh quickly washed and got into his Spiderman pajamas and was asleep in the double tent almost before Tina could zip up his sleeping bag.
Tina watched him for a few minutes – everyone said that the three boys all looked like Emily but all Tina could see was how like Bette they were – despite the impossibility of it – Bette’s sons looked like her with their dark curls and winning smiles.
Bette had put a pillow for Madison’s broken arm to rest on.
“Hey sweetie “Tina sat on the bed beside Bette who was watching Madison whose eyes were almost closed.
“Hey mommy – can I have ice cream for breakfast? “
“We will see – maybe after lunch eh? “
“I thought if it was nice we could all go out tomorrow “Bette suggested
“That depends on how this one is feeling “
“I am fine mommy – please can we go out?”
“I don’t know “
“I’ll just check on the others – good night Madison “
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I definitely believe it is time to CHANGE THE LOCKS!!! Oh, BLACKMAIL can be oh so cruel, but highly and NECESSARY and EFFECTIVE!!!!
You’re so imaginative and creative, always thinking of twists and turns and misdirection. Excellent!! PPS.
I wouldn’t be surprised if Ollie was actually going to leave the coke in Tina’s house and tip off a cop about his ex-wife possessing drugs. But his stupid ass passed out first. That is classic. LOL!
Damn. I hope Ollie doesn’t get violent. They need to change the locks. He might love the kids.. but I hope Bette tells Tina. They can’t send the kids off with someone who has a drug problem. Loved Bette the protector. Glad Tina wouldn’t ever go back with Ollie. Still think no matter what Ollie pulls its obvious Tina would never go there again.. but Emily might always be the elephant in the room. PPS.
Oh this is very frightening. First thing’s first, they must get Tina’s house locks changed, and include a bar lock on all doors so he can’t pick the lock and get into the house. Thank goodness Bette was there – no telling what would have happened. Is Ollie trying to plant something in Tina’s house as a ploy to get custody of the children; or is he possibly hiding his “stash” at Tina’s house so that Paul can’t find it? Bette needs to tell Paul and Tina both of her discovery…I know I wouldn’t want Ollie caring for children by himself; and Paul might be using too, but I doubt it because his behavior isn’t erratic like Ollie’s has been. This puts a whole different light on the how and why Hannah was hurt. Great chapter Allie…PPS!
I still think there is another bombshell up your sleeve for this story, especially where Ollie is concerned, and it ain’t just that he’s doing drugs! LOL. Love your writing, thank you so much for being so generous with your free time to give us these tales of our girls!
Bette is awesome and hope this will help her more to kick ollies ass forever, he just an ass!
Ally, That was magnificent. Bette and Tina are just wonderful together. Bringing out the best in each other. Tina was so lucky to have the calming effect of Bette during this tough time while Bette showed remarkable restraint in dealing with Ollie. I do hope that Bette uses this new information wisely, protecting Tina and her children without destroying Ollie’s relationship with them all. Bette’s conversation with Becky was a real highlight. Sweet to see how much the kids pick up on and want the best for their mum and themselves. Tina was a class act in her discussion with Ollie, particular;y as she tried to remove him without waking the house. Now I really can;t wait to see where this leads. As always I will be here waiting and following. Many thanks from Your Loyal Fan.
exciting update Ally….u gotta update soon plz…
AllyE, your ability to amaze me has just increased tenfold. Ollie is just such an ass. When will he leave them alone, hope Bette uses this in a good way to get him to back off, maybe Paul should know that he is a user. We don’t want to make Paul leave Ollie because then he will never leave her alone. He can NOT have his cake and eat it too. Bastard. Thanks for a wonderful chapter Ally. PPS
Bette to the rescue again! Great chapter, I’m a little confused was he trying to plant drugs in Tina’s home or is it for personal use? I do believe that fool might have tried to rape Tina if Bette hadn’t shown up if he keeps it up he will lose everyone he loves and his job too.
Wow Ally I continue to be amazed with your creativitiy and how you make a store progress. Just fantastic.
White substance, huh? Well, if Oily is falling asleep, I think we can rule out cocaine. Heroin? I’ve seen people get quite drowzy on that, like on a busy street standing up, which when you think of it is quite a feat. Is Paul going to find out that Oily was trying to get Tina back? Is Oily’s boss going to find out that Oily has white substance in his pocket and probably his system? Is Oily going to get a therapist to help him with his many issues and profound confusion? Could I ask another question?
Funnyone, I think you’ve asked all the good questions… Ollie’s all hopped up, and nowhere to nod. Tsk tsk. Stupid prat. And here he is, giving Tina such a hard time. I hope Bette is the bigger person, but at the same time, I want her to use the bag o’ white stuff against that ijit, even if it’s just to keep him in line. Wonder if Paul knows? Anyhow, great twist, ally. Thanks!
LMAO@funnyone! So Ollie’s a druggie? Bette’s going to throw him out on the front lawn…..Love it!!
Everyday my desire to kick so hard Ollies is increasing! i can’t believe this man! but is good that T&B have a very good relation and they are confident about each other. I hope Bette find the way to keep Ollie away! thanks for the post girl
oh this is wonderful. what an ass. thanks.
That was so great! Ollie is so screwed up. He’s a drunk and maybe a drug addict and yelling at his kids….it is so time for this guy to go down. I feel bad for Paul b/c he seems like a nice enough guy but somehow I don’t think he is going to stick around w/ Ollie if he keeps behaving this way. Thankfully Bette is there for Tina but i wonder if she will tell Tina what she found in his jacket or if she’ll keep it secret. Great Chapter!!!