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All you need is love chapter 28
ALL YOU NEED IS LOVE Chapter 28
Helena rounded on Alice
"What the hell did you just do “
“I was trying to help her “
“It looks like it really worked well – gee Alice – she’s happy for the first time in forever and you just have to upset her “
“Okay – it isn’t helping matters you two fighting “ Tina said trying to assess what to do for the best
“I was trying to help her “Alice protested to Tina.
“I know you were “
“Is everything alright?” Dan called from where he and Becky were standing
“Yeah sure “Tina waved at the kids “You two look after the kids. Make sure they get back alright – I have to go to Bette “
“Are you sure you will be okay Tina – she is pretty volatile when she is angry “Alice warned.
Tina rested her hand on Alice’s arm
“It’s okay Al – I am pretty sure I know how to deal with her “
“Don’t worry about Becka and Dan – we will get them back to the others “Helena smiled at Tina. She was concerned about Bette’s outburst but was confident about Tina’s ability to deal with her.
“Okay – later guys “
Tina waved at the kids again before following Bette into the woods. After a few 100 yards she stopped and listened. All she could hear was birds singing – either Bette had got so far away that her footsteps through the undergrowth had been silenced or she had stopped moving. After a few more paces Tina could hear the sounds of a stream or river. She knew enough about her new lover to be confident that Bette would head in this direction. Sure enough after a few minutes Tina came into a clearing and saw Bette standing throwing stones into a river. She was crying – Tina stood and looked at her for a few seconds. Bette was by far the most complex yet fascinating person she had ever met. Her books hinted at a person struggling with inner demons – they were laced drama and tension. But Bette was by far the kindest and most loving woman Tina had known – as a lover she was giving and tender. It was not going to be the easiest relationship but it certainly looked like it was going to be the most fulfilling in every way.
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Oh AllyE, wonderful story. I love the way you are telling this story. “Chewing the carpet,” huh, I love that analogy, and as Garfield says, “I resemble that remark.” Truly understand how she was feeling. Love it. pps.
oh my! Great chapter Ally!
YOu go Bette. I still don’t see what Ollie is so bothered by . The dude left his wife and children for a guy. He’s happy why can’t Tina be. Ollie you so need to get over yourself. Slapping would be good. Alice needs to let Bette tell her own story, she’ll get their.
great chapter!! i just love this story, sorry but ollie is an ass!
Excellent – Bette lays it out for Ollie – fine just fine.
wow, i guess old ollie heard that
Totally awesome Ally! Alice may feel the need to ‘discuss’ things with Bette, but I don’t think she thought it through very well before she started in at this given time and place. Alice should have waited until she and Bette had more privacy before she went about bursting Bette’s bubble. I love the way Tina put it – concentrating on their future together is what’s important. Bette talking about Emily with Tina will come in time. Alice trying to force Bette into a corner about it will bring no good to anyone. I know Tina can’t wait to be in Bette’s bed tonight. Ollie needs to stop showing his ass. You would think he would take this opportunity to show Tina that he is happy for her – considering all the misery he has caused her. He owes Tina that much. I love your writing Ally. Thank you for posting such a lovely story.
Slap his ass or kick his ass? Either way it’s hillarious.
Ollie is such a b*rk. Honestly, how did Tina stand him long enough to even marry him? Bette’s got this battle won, hands down. He needs to find something else to do with his time. Selfish prat. Is his boyfriend Paul this insufferably vain as well? Me being this wound up is a barometer of how good the story is, ally. Post soon
Hey Mate….just stopped by to leave a comment after I read this yesterday. Busy day as I mentioned in my e-mail back that I JUST sent..LOL! As for the story, I love the way Tina handled discussions with Bette. I also love that Tina was dishin’ with Shane! Post when ya can my friend and we’ll chat later! xx
way 2 go bette..slap the jerk’s arse///love this///becky is very wise….pps
Now, THAT’S what I call “Drawing a line in the sand” and letting Ollie know what will happen when he crosses it. The only thing that was missing with the interaction between Bette and Ollie was her waiving goodbye to the kids. Now, THAT would have been rubbing it into Ollie’s face. It’s time that Paul reeled Ollie in some in reference to Tina. I loved the way that Tina handled Bette being upset. Her friends know how Bette was in the past when she was upset, but they have not seen how she and Tina interact and are supportive of each other. I think the change will surprise them all. This is a whole different chemistry between B&T and this will become ovious to the children, Ollie and all of their friends. NOw it’s time for Bette to go in and comfort her partner. Hey Ally, “You go girl” BRAVO and GREAT job here. :o)
Dear Ally, Jo, Gumby, Chynsia, Cerdi, and all the ladies who write these fantastic stories on this site. I am in awe of all of u and send my blessing to u all for these unbelievable, incredible and beautiful stories. I have discovered this site only a few weeks ago and have been glued to my computer since then. I watched The L Word though its gives a good insight to lesbian’s life but I always wondered about many other aspects of this way of life, especially the physical relationship. Since reading these stories I feel as if I have gained years of experience, knowledge, confidence and much more. Thank u ladies, u r all distinguished excellent, incredible and talented individuals and my HREOS. Once again THANK U.
Don’t make me slap your ass Detective just because I can “I love how you ended that…what a perfect statement!!! tks Ally
Oooowee! I’d sure like to see some ass slapping! Glad that Bette calmed down. Glad that Becky calmed down. Waiting to see if Ollie will calm down.
What the hell crawled up Ollie’s ass and died? If he and Bette weren’t at odds he probably wouldn’t have minded that Tina didn’t call. Also, and this isn’t the first time I’ve thought (and probably not the first time it’s been said), but it seems like Ollie thought he could have his cake and eat it too. He cheated on Tina, they split up and he moved on with Paul. Yet he perhaps thought Tina would just stay single? Tina’s a very patient woman I think. It’s so tempting to know all the details of Bette and Emily’s marriage, especially after Alice spoke to her. But Tina’s letting Bette set the pace for that discussion. True class act. Looking forward to your next post!
Oh my God, I can’t believe that I’m almost firs and most important that I finally got the courage to write!!. I’m from Argentina and two years ago after the firs season of the L word ended I though, “Wow I have to see more about this”. So thanks god internet exist, I discovered this site and the firs story I red was yours.(It was very funny because I didn’t understand and though it was a real chapter.I’m so naive!) And after that moment I’ve become a very big fan of yours and from other writers like Jo or Gumby. So please, keep writing like this, you are a genious!!!
WOW! that was just…. wow!!! I love your stories Ally, you are a great writer!!! please, keep writing like this.
Go head Bette. Slap his ass. Great update.
Tina’s reaction was absolutely perfect, just reland Ms. Porter to Earth after hitting Mach20 on the anger scale. Ally, great as always, how do you do it? you’re the greatest! Post when you can.
Heh…chewing the carpet…*giggle, snicker* Back to reading…
Hey mate, Im very happy with the comments you got this time. Its wonderful to see the girls telling you how great your writing is. :) I liked how this chapter ended and all of it but I can surely say I liked even more the comments you got. Keep up the good work, dear. xxx
Damn. Bette is ready to thrown down alpha style over her woman. Glad Tina could calm her down. She is a much better woman than I would be if she doesn’t want insight into Bette’s marriage. But it is a good thing. Love this story.
wanted you to know that im catching up. just got back from san fran for pride. nothing like it. thanks.
Good chapter. Damn thats right Bette slap his stupid ass girl you are awesome you go girl.