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    Story written on November 9, 2004 by Shakennotstirred.
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    Story Shortlink: https://www.lf.beardesk.com/?p=50223
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    2. I feel like the nurse lady in the Omen? When she’s standing above everyone at the birthday party and she yells out “I did it for you, Damien. All for you.” Except, I don’t want to like, hang myself. And your name’s not Damien. And I have this fear of heights thing that would prevent me from actually BEING up there but……where was I going with this?

      Right. I got it. You’re the reason I write. Just to say that “I’m like Olives.” And again, only in that I’m writing Bette and Tina fan fiction. Like I told Sparta, you guys are in the Pantheon. I’m just passing through in my toga.

      You’re an incredible writer, Olives and again, I sincerely thank you for writing. 5 stars!!

    9. My very first taste of fan fiction was through your incredible story, Umbrella and ever since then… ever since that very first chapter of Umbrella, I have been so completely hooked. I Love this story. It is truly one of my personal all time favorites. You are a gifted writer.

      5 stars! Just Brilliant! Please post again soon. Thanks again.

    10. Thank you for the update of Umbrella,one of my favorites.Actually, all your stories are my favorites.Fabulous as always. What a treat to have two posts from you two days in a row. Thanks Olives.

    11. SNS it always makes my day to see a new chapter from you posted. Umbrella was the first story I read here also and you got me hooked on fanfic with it. Now I’m officially an addict of your stories and many others. Great chapter, I look forward to the next.

    13. I’m not saying I want it to rain all the time where you live. But if it gives you a reason to write another chapter, let me start the rain dance. Great chapter.

    15. shaken I found this story about a month ago and I secretly wished you come back and finish it. THANK YOU. I have to say crammit’s comment the first one is TOO TOO funny. I do have to agree that you don’t waste any words you paint a clear picture and the sentiments and emotions jump from the screen. You are a true writer with an awesome talent. Thank you for sharing it with us. THIS IS GREAT, EXCELLENT, SUPERB!!!!!

    16. i read this story when i first came on this site and i’m glad to see a new chapter. great addition to the story and i love the piano scene. great writing all around here and on the chase. please continue. thanks for writing too! :D

    17. Awsome Olive, I enjoyed your stories as always. You’re really good. And it seems you have become a reason for many writes. This is a great way to close my night.

    18. I’ve been watching every single day for this update – it was so worth the wait. Please keep going with this story, it really is beautiful. Thanks for writing.

    22. I have to agree. This was the first story i ever read. And i’m hooked on ff also. However, your stories are still my favorites and the best stuff i’ve read. Congrats on the award, I told you you would win.

    24. I’ll post it here, I’ll post it at “The Chase”, I’ll rent billboards from here to da wes’siiiide…truly, without question, and undenaibly, your work is the absolute best out there, and you motivate me to get better by the word. being a sci-fi nerd, i gotta say that you are a Jedi among um, non Jedi (LOL). Congrats on the award, mama.

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