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Story written on August 8, 2004 by Shakennotstirred.
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Excellent as always, Olives. Loving every update! Hope you have safe travels back home from your vacation.
Sublime!
I love the care you take in unfolding the relationship between these two women. As usual, an excellent job!
Oooo the opening ch of umbrella loved the link here…GGreat
Superb! I love how you weave how they first met with this series. It’s great. Waiting to see how Bette & Tina is going to continue spending the rest of their time there…
glad to see how Tina was able to hear how truely vulnerable to expressing her true feelings. Excellent chapter, looking forward to the next. The site went down last night so I went on the other site and re read the umbrella series again. And here it is woven in again so well. Thanks
Do you remember the big scene in the middle of ‘Funnygirl’ when Fannie is taking all those conveyances to get to Nicky Arnstein on time? It ends the first part of the film? When she’s on the tugboat singing ‘Don’t Rain on my Parade’?
I’m imagining you taking the whole clan back to the airport for another vacation: the flurry, trying to remember everything.
Thanks for writing this in the midst of your travels!
Have a good vacation!
Loved the erotic interlude fantasy.
Oh – my — gawd — thank sssooo much. this is one of my favorites stories — i’ve missed it . .i’ve missed you . . i love you . . thank you . . i’m such an addict , . . .
Excellent
Bravo!!!
Thank you Olives for writing and posting this chapter before you have to leave again. I’m going to missed you..hurry back! Hope you have a safe and wonderful trip. I’ll be waiting for your next chapter :-)
Ya know, I logged on today hoping there would be a chapter of “The Chase” waiting for me. I wasn’t disappointed–another genius chapter, Olives!
This is a wonderful series Olives.
Ditto what hotpepper said..
“I’ll march my band out. I’ll beat my drum…”
Okay, it’s just you. Enjoy!
Thank you Olives for a lovely B&T chapter. Have a safe trip.Hope to read more soon.:)
This is a great story. Let Tina & Bette adopt her nephew.. Please continue.
What a great Sunday afternoon surprise! Loved it! Thank you :)
What a great Sunday afternoon surprise! Loved it! Thank you :)