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Just another heartbreak – (Chapter: Part 2 (complete))
Just another heartbreak
So, our life was proceeding and she had just gotten a huge promotion that required her to stay at work longer. She was so excited. At night, before we slept, she would always talk about the people at her work, and the new friends that she’d met. She would talk about him, and her, and he and she. She talked about a lot of people. As much as I’d like to say that I listened to all her stories, I wasn’t exactly the most attentive person. I would usually just drone out her words, but listen to her beautiful voice.
It seemed to fool her, so I didn’t have a problem with it. I still recall some of the nights that we spent together.
I was reading a book at one point, and she was talking as usual. I always found her voice to be such a soothing agent, it calmed me. Like I said, I didn’t exactly listen to what she was listening, but I still technically listened.
There was the night that she was talking about her coworker who had such a great talent for her job. She was giving her praises, and was talking about how she was going to be taught by this person. I was sincerely happy for her at the time. I was glad that she was able to meet and be with people that she could feel at home with.
There was the night when she was talking about him, another coworker whom had made it be one of her closest friends. She asked me to meet him, but I wouldn’t meet him until recently. He was apparently quite funny, and despite being a bit of a klutz at his job, he was the type to always be there for a friend.
The talks went on about her two new friends, and her other many more friends. I still didn’t find anything wrong with it, she was happy, and so that meant that I was happy. She was my whole world, is my whole world.
More time went on, and some things were changing. It didn’t seem as though we were changing, because I found that there was nothing wrong with us and we were still as happy as ever. But she started showing some weird signs. I didn’t know it at the time, but there really was something wrong with us.
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omg how sad!! yes I’m sniffling again. utterly heartbreaking but still a great story none the less! fantastic job.
Serious tear-jerker. This was awesome
OMG i can’t even begin to explain how good this story was. out of anything that i have ever read this eas by far the most powerful and real story ever.It even made me shed a tear or two. You should really consider screenwriting. i look forward to reading future stories. :)
I dont think any other story besides MD on here has evoked this much emotion from me. It was tragically beautiful and my heart broke into pieces as the story progressed. It was beautiful but sad and very well written I loved it and u are just utterly great for writting this hehe =]
That was…I don’t know…words can’t even describe it. The whole time I was reading it, I was going on an emotional rollercoaster. I love fics that make me think and make me cry….this one did all that. I love the way you went the entire story without mentioning any names…it made this story so much more powerful and I felt my heartbreaking with the characters. The eight year old you did a great job creating part of this story, but the now you did a beautiful job making it whole. Thank You for sharing.